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Hermit

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I have used this photo for the composition 
Pisqah Green Wizard 2011-05-24 46 by skydancer-stock tree river by marlene-stock Forest 48 by AnitaJoy-Stock A morning in Lothlorien 33 by Dragoroth-stock Tree Stock #44 by Noireuse plant by Margaritamorrigan
 
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

This is a very stunning, amazing piece of art. Let's just get that out of the way first and foremost!

The tree in the foreground is distracting. It's amazingly done, and the slightly out of focus is accurate for the focus being on the wizard, but (and I know this is going to sound weird) it might work better if the scene was shifted counter clockwise, with the hermit in the middle, putting the foreground tree a little less in the foreground and more to the right. It would also put the darker area to the right of the hermit behind him and it's my opinion that it would help the focus pop a little more. I love the scene, I love the detail, and the trees themselves are all wonderfully done and exquisite, the lighting beautiful, and the whole emotion and anticipation of the scene makes me tingly and wonder what's happening, what's going to BE happening?!